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I think you're magazine proposal uses a good variety of detail on what you want to include in your magazine, and what you will do to make it unique. The limited edition aspects are really good and I think you will pick a lot of readers based on what you are offering. I think the name and tag line of your magazine works really well as it is unique and catches people's attention.
I think you could improve on developing your ideas for the layout of your magazine a bit more to visualise what it will look like, but overall you have a good proposal.